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ANGUS MACTAVISH AND THE
SASKATOON LONELY HEARTS CLUB
 

Saskatchewan nights are long and cold,
On those windblown plains so stark;
And Angus needed someone warm to hold
And cling to in the dark.
So long he’d lived on those plains alone,
He was lonesome to the core;
His dreams and night-sweats made him moan
And left him craving more.

His yearnings for a woman’s touch
Consumed his tormented mind;
Said Angus, “Ah’ve suffer-r-red fa-r-r too much;
Fo-r-r-r nineteen year-r-r-s Ah’ve pined.
The bachelor’s life’s na’ worth a damn;
Ah’ve got to find a wife,
Who’s just as lonesome as Ah am,
To bring pleasure to ma life.”

And so it was one autumn day,
While on the throne he sat,
That a classified item caught his eye -
In the Saskatoon Plains Gazette.
The “Personals” section was just chock-full
Of folks he’d like to meet;
And giving his trousers an upward pull,
He lurched forward to his feet.

With pencil and paper clutched in hand,
Into the kitchen he burst,
And sitting at the table planned
His own ad verse by verse.
“Mature bachelor, young at heart,
Old-fashioned, yet witty, and gay;”
(“Not a bad star-r-t,” Angus thought, “on my par-r-t.”)
Oh, this was a glor-r-r-ious day!

With sweaty palms and furrowed brow
Angus struggled with each word,
Fearing they’d not sound right somehow,
And his yearnings would go unheard.
Wanting to sound down-to-earth, yet clever,
Each phrase he chose with care;
No man made a finer effort ever,
To lure a woman to his lair.

He poured his soul out on the page;
His desire was so great.
For to Angus a lass of any age
Would make a bonnie mate.
“Old or young or fat or thin,”
He wrote, “I do na’ care;
“Ah don’t give a hoot what shape you’r-r-r-e in,
Ah’m handy at repair-r-r!”

He carefully folded the page at last
And addressed the envelope,
He stamped it, and the die was cast:
In the mail lay his fondest hope.
“Somewher-r-e ma true love’s out ther-r-r-e,”
Said Angus with a leer,
“And after she sees ma letter-r-r-r,
In no time she’ll be her-r-r-e.”

Twelve kilometers down a dusty track
He trudged to post his mail;
As the letter was added to the mailman’s sack,
Angus bragged, “This canna’ fail!
Ah’ve or-r-r-r-dered me a wife today;
Ah expect she’ll be her-r-r-r e soon .”
And as the mailman drove away,
Angus hummed a bawdy tune.

He watched the mailman fade from sight,
Then headed for his shack
To spend another restless night;
Oh, he hated to go back!
He scrubbed that den with pure lye soap
And tidied up the place;
From his tarnished mirror a glimmer of hope
Shone forth from that lonely face.

Through weeks of waiting the Scotsman paced,
But no letter came for him.
He began to think his scheme a waste -
Hopes for true love grew dim.
And every time he made the trip
To meet the mail, he knew
The mailman thought he’d “lost his grip”
And was laughing at him, too.

When Angus had all but given up,
One day the mailman came,
And said with a grin , “You’re a lucky pup!
Here’s a letter from some dame.”
And sure enough in the mailman’s hand
A lavender envelope lay.
Angus’s knees grew weak; he could hardly stand;
It took his breath away.

With trembling hand he took the letter
And held it to his breast;
Beneath his woolen sweater
His heart was pounding in his chest.
The lilac-scented pages brought
A shiver of ecstasy;
And Angus, whose cheeks were flaming hot,
Could only stammer, “G-G-Gee!”

He tore the letter open then
And hurriedly started to read;
“Dearest Angus,” it began,
“You’re just the man I need.
Like you, I’m lonely, too, and sad,
But I feel our time is ripe.
Oh, I do hope you won’t think I’m bad,
But, Big Boy, you’re my type!”

Ah, the pleasures conjured from a simple phrase,
“I’ll give my all to you...”;
As raging prairie fires blaze,
Angus warmed up, too.
But he chilled as he read the final line,
And his features hardened like flint.

“I’m on my way, and you’re all mine!
Your lover forever.........
Clint” !

© Roger L. Traweek - 1998


 

 

                                                                            
About the author- ROGER TRAWEEK writes:
 

      I was born into a ranching family in eastern Montana in 1940. I attended Montana public schools, including a one-room country school, and graduated from Montana State University in 1963.  I taught high school English in Montana public schools for six years before taking up staff work for the Montana Education Association and Oregon Education Association.

 

     I draw from the memories of my childhood on the family ranch which  my brother still own, now in our family for more than 100 years, for the themes of my poems, two of which can be found on Charlie Russell's Stagecoach (http://www.charlierussell.org/rtraweek.htm )  These poems are also featured onThe Bar D Ranch, a popular cowboy poetry website (www.cowboypoetry.com). One of my poems about the ranch where I grew up, “The Home Place,” featured above is also included in The Big Roundup, an anthology of cowboy poetry published in 2001. My roots go back to the family ranch in eastern Montana where I was a boy in the 1940’s. Photo of Roger Traweek.Although I chose to pursue “book learnin’" and ultimately a different  line of work than ranching, my childhood was and remains to this day among the happiest periods of my life. Although  life on the ranch hadn’t changed all that much over the previous hundred or so years - no conveniences, no electricity, no telephone, no television, no running water, no indoor plumbing - nonetheless, I enjoy a wealth of good memories of those times which I try to preserve in my writing.  As The Home Place suggests, no one lives on the ranch any longer, my parents and an older brother having passed away, leaving no one to operate it.   I wrote The Home Place on-site during a recent visit there in an effort to confront and lay to rest the many “ghosts” of my memories.
    

         The inspiration for Angus MacTavish came about as a result of a young woman I knew whose original home was in Saskatchewan.  She had just returned to Oregon from a visit to her parents' home and told me of how she had been reading the "personals" in the Saskatoon Plains Gazette while there. The SPG is a farm and ranch paper and very popular with all the folks who live in the area. There was an ad from a bachelor seeking a relationship of some sort in it, and she answered it and waited to see if it brought any results.  I teased her and told her that some of those old fellas had been out on the plains a long time and were no doubt pretty eager for female companionship.  She's an attractive woman, about 30 years old at the time, and has a most delightful smile and laugh.  We had a good laugh about it, and she waited patiently for a response, but none ever came.  I told her she was probably just a little too lively and too much of a free thinker for some old Scot to consider hooking up with.  I guess she never did hear from the fellow to whom she wrote.......his loss, for sure.  So that's the story behind Angus.  I think I probably also patterned him somewhat after Garrison Keillor's old Norwegian bachelors of Lake Wobegon fame.


       I went to Elko in January 2000, met some nice people and left feeling inspired.  I have always enjoyed writing both prose and poetry, and now that I’m retired I can devote more time to it. I’m currently working on my autobiography, chronicling in particular ranch life as I knew it in an era long gone now.  I retired in 1999 after spending 30 years as an advocate for teachers  in both Montanan and Oregon. I now make my home in Powell  butte, Oregon, where I continue to live in a rural lifestyle.
 

     Charlie Russell has long been one of my favorite Western artists. Living in Montana as I did for much of my life - some of it in the Helena-Great Falls area - I saw first-hand the landscapes which were the backdrop for many of his paintings of the West and cowboy life.   Charlie's talents did justice to the rich colors and pure grandeur of 'his' Montana"Up East Rosebud Valley" by Gordon Traweek.  Additionally, my grandfather and his older brother both arrived in Montana in the 1880's with the trail herds from Texas, and I've always been drawn to Charlie's paintings because I know it accurately represents the early cowboy lifestyle they knew on the ranges along the Powder River in Montana and Wyoming. . . .

        But when it comes to contemporary painters, I am partial to one, Gordon Traweek who happens to be my cousin. He is a Montana painter also. Before his recent death, he had a studio in Joliet, MT.  His painting "Up East Rosebud Valley"  ( to the right) shows a valley not too far from where I grew up.
 

           The Range Writers is proud to feature Roger Traweek and the art of his cousin, Gordon Traweek...this is one mighty talented family!   Roger Traweek can go from clever, witty verse like "ANGUS MACTAVISH AND THE SASKATOON LONELY HEARTS CLUB" (above)  to first rate poetry such as "REQUIEM" and "THE HOME PLACE"  featured on Charlie Russell's Stagecoach.   And for your further enjoyment, you will find a good collection of his cowboy western poetry  at the Bar-D RANCH: http://www.cowboypoetry.com/rt.htm . You can see more of the art of Gordon Traweek on the Bill McIntosh Gallery web site: http://www.mcintoshart.com/Exhibits/Traweek/Traweek.html .                                                                                                                                   
                                           
Your comments are invited: r.traweek@att.net      

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